- The intro is way too long. Perhaps get FRAPs of all of these players (or some) in action and then flash their name on the screen as if it were an introduction. Rather than scrolling their names across the screen.
- The music should probably be a little more upbeat at the killing parts, but it's not too bad.
- Throw in some humor, it doesn't have to be all serious
- The video ends about halfway for me at around 1:52. Nothing is shown/heard after that.
If you want to make a video, we should get together all of the people that would be interested in such a project (ie. I know that loadedgun wanted to try his hand at a Renegade video). Then ask people to submit 5-30 second video clips of themselves playing Renegade. Then you can crop out scenes that you need and select those that fit best.
Plus, you need a choreographer. Adding music and effects at the right time will drastically change the emotion generated while watching a scene. For example: had you picked some really upbeat/fast song to play as you jumped off the building it would have seemed less emo (playing slow music as you jump off a building).







